Scene 15

Pilot Scene 15

Daniel and Louise are acting out a scene. Louise in on the floor with Daniel stood over her. Mark walks in and stands in the doorway.

Daniel:
Get up now you lazy worm.

Louise looks up at him and begs.

Louise:
Please I can’t.

Mark:
Wow and I wondered why you two are writers.

Daniel and Louise look startled.

Mark:
No please continue. Looking good down there Louise.

Louise:
Come close and I will make the view even better.

Mark smiles and walks in.

Daniel:
Everything all good.

Mark:
Well they’ve found a link to this kid and myself so that’s a start. Is this the scene?

Mark walks over and grabs the sheets, his eyes flicker onto the school scene.

Mark:
You printed off the school scene.

Daniel throws something else over them.

Daniel:
Just reference.

Mark begins reading the script.

Mark:
This is good.


Louise:
Really?

Mark:
Yeah really good.

Mark suddenly begins writing notes on the sheet of paper. Daniel and Louise look at eachother as he keeps on writing notes.

Louise:
Mark, you said it was good.

Mark:
Oh it is… I just… yeah its nothing. By the way, me and Andrew are going out to the Oyster club tonight. If you fancy it?

Daniel:
More networking.

Mark:
We’ve had a stressful day. Your invited to Louise.

Louise:
Aren’t you kind.

Daniel:
I will see what Chloe has to say.

Mark:
Bring her.

Daniel:
She won’t like that.

Mark:
Seven thirty, He taps the sheet, We can go over these changes.

Mark leaves the room.

Daniel:
Now where were we?

Camera cuts immediately, without a fade as it follows Mark into the next scene